job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
Nowadays, people ofte have full- time for job and the demand of jobs in order to save money is very high. And I think if you want to work effectively, you should feel happy when you do that job. So, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
At present, employees who have job satisfaction in a number of ways. They can add many friends, mates from companies, offices. They also can improve their skills and experiences. When they do a job well, they help their city develop social and economy. They can do everything if they feel satisfied with job, they feel worth to do this. And I think factor contribute to job satisfaction is idulgement.
However, there is some people who is not enjoy their work. There ‘s many reason to explain that. They feel unqualified to complete that task. Or their work so boring and repetitive. I think that person should find a new job which suit with skill and experience of you.
Conclusion, job satisfaction plays an important in our life. You feel happy when yoy do a worth job and you love it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62433862434 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60644179193 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582010582011 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.9355399626 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.625 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8125 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27126538889 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108122573894 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173403053218 0.0667982634062 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186262114009 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120694649828 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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