Lacking of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?
Nowadays, there has always been considerable discussion in terms of the growing seriousness in clean water scarcity all over the world. This essay will discuss about the significant effects and give some substantial solutions for the above issue.
Fresh water shortage can be responsible for some severe problems which are relevant to agricultural and industrial aspects. Firstly, with poor supply of fresh water farmers cannot grow any crops and cause the mass death of animals. Besides, water shortage also leads to starvation among people, as it is impossible to create profitable yields for cultivation. Secondly, in the absence of sufficient water, mineral exploiters, food suppliers, manufacturers and distributors of electricity may find it difficult to operate their business. Therefore, water has a direct impact on economic sector.
Rainwater harvesting is one of the main factor of dealing with water shortage, many areas with very little groundwater reserves can greatly improve the way they harvest rainwater by building larger facilities and incorporating better technologies. In addition, farmers need to capture and dispose of floating pollution in waterway, so designing barrier for floating water pollution seems necessary. Moreover, many people in rural areas have extreme difficulties in accessing clean water source; consequently, charity to construct wells, sanitation and agricultural systems will help them solve these problems. Furthermore, more developed countries having a higher level of technological advancements can help out greatly by sharing their advancements with developing countries.
In conclusion, the fresh water scarcity is increasing alarmingly throughout the world and we must work on effective solutions for protecting the water sources.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86538461538 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06125578517 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688461538462 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0730780514 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142010314479 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522369567824 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047951244899 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849836119314 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524787150109 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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