A large amount of advertisements nowadays are now targeted at children. Many people say this has negative effects on children and should therefore be banned. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, advertisements are proliferating in almost every sector of business. As a result, a number of people opine that advertisement, especially aiming children, have detrimental effects. However, I partially agree than rather than banning advertisements, we should show our children an appropriate direction and convince them.
It is indubitably true that in recent times, a large number of companies are targeting children as their main consumer through advertising. Such advertisement should be banned and there are several reasons for this. Firstly, children are often lured by the attractive advertisement, and also by the small gifts that come along with the product. As a result, they usually don't understand the value of money which may stand as an obstacle in their future. For example, A child may insist for a toy, whose value is not that high but this behavior can be harmful in near future when he asks everything he likes. Therefore, only such advertisement should be banned.
Secondly, it is also seen that there are some advertisements which are truly beneficial to the consumers. By such advertisement children may learn some useful virtue. For instance, when a children watches an advertisement addressing to some educational purpose such as BYJU, which is a fun learning application for students. Hence it can be useful in many ways if right path is showed to children. Moreover, we cannot ban advertisement but we can convince and make them understand the value of money.
In conclusion, it is true that the main aim of advertisements are children but it doesn't mean that advertisement who are like a helping hand to children should also be banned. Instead children should be taught the difference of right and wrong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... indubitably true that in recent times, a large number of companies are targeting children as the...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... the product. As a result, they usually dont understand the value of money which may...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
... some useful virtue. For instance, when a children watches an advertisement addressing to ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... fun learning application for students. Hence it can be useful in many ways if right ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...m of advertisements are children but it doesnt mean that advertisement who are like a ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...hand to children should also be banned. Instead children should be taught the differenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20774647887 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10558389983 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4391080263 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271985266931 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972036311582 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630101503949 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179110673167 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512063967207 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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