Spacious shopping malls are becoming more widespread than small outlets. Search vast popularity is gained because of time-saving and special service in large centres. On the other hand, local shops are reasonably priced and have opportunities to make better relationships between a client and a seller.
First of all, substitution of local outlets has some strong disadvantages. In most cases, these shops are somewhat remote, which is why the owners have their own permanent customers. For example, greengrocery provides only its local area with vegetables, subsequently, people, living in apartment blocks nearby, purchase constantly. Traditionally, there work barely few servicing people, that is why clients know them well and vice versa. In other words, a stark chance to bond trustfully with a seller. As an example, when my mother owned small clothing shop, she always attempted to encourage her reterning visitors due to the unpopularity of similar stores among strangers. Therefore she usually made little gifts and exciting conversations with them. Likewise, due to the same reason, the price may be lowered to be affordable in order to sell the product.
Although such small stores are popular amongst certain group of customer, the niche of largest shopping malls and supermarkets is fairly wider. By gaining vast spreading, centers have the majority of people as customers. Obviously, this is beneficial for both two sides of trade. For instance, owing to the desire of owners to attract more clients, big malls are service oriented and has various convenient features. Moreover, everything suitable is supplied in these complexes and wide range of convenience and goods are provided. After all, consumers save their time since every necessary product can be bought in one place. Furthermore, stores located in one place create mutual advertisements to each other by just being close.
On the whole, despite the possibility of losing the opportunity to built strong relations with customers, widely distributed large shopping points have more overwhelming advantages such as high quality convenience and impressive amount of supply.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: of the largest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, after all, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in most cases, in other words, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5166163142 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89625851051 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670694864048 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9931372135 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1052631579 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4210526316 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129207766065 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354573843831 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485918935812 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849002473074 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393942341898 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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