Leaders and directors is an organization normally elder people. Some people think that young people is more better. Do you agree or disagree?
It is generally seen that, older individuals are hired by any organization or company for leadership rather than young ones. The notion of the some persons that, young ones should be hired for higher position like leader or director. I partially agree with the argument and believe that, there are a few works that not only senior citizens can perform in a better way but also young ones are capable.
For some reasons, Older people can do good job for any organization or company. One chief fact is probably that, elder ones have accumulated more experience from their longer working life. They know how to deal or talk with other person. Moreover, they can stay calm in critical situations and can easily sort-out that problem with the better alternative.
Another key point may be that, if elderly persons are selected for the post of leader or director than every collegue of that particular organization would follow the instructions of the leader. They have good decision maker. Consequently, it may be uplifted the profit of the company or organization.
In spite of this, how youngsters can do better job for any organization. The main favourable fact might be that, young ones are more innovatives. They can use their creativity to rise the profit of an organization. Apart from this, they are more energetic and enthusiastic instead of older citizens. They would work flat out for an organization. Subsequently, due to the hard work of youth, company or organization would make their name and fame in the world.
In crux, it can be confidently conveyed that, both older and younger people are able to take the responsibility of an organization or company and can perform every task in a good way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92258064516 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73144101734 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522580645161 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4353061185 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205876041345 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608435820191 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511398767324 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1193971901 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272980201015 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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