Leisure is old growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. Do you agree or disagree?
Self entertainment is one of the most vital ingredient in human life. Although, these days it seems to be trivial due to rise in modern technology and gadgets. I support this statement to a larger extent. My inclination is elaborated in the ensuring paragraphs with examples.
Firstly, with the more usage of gadgets people are being addicted to it. For instance, maximum number of individuals when wake up from bed they start using their smartphones. A research conducted by department of psychology of John Hopkins University concluded that if a person starts the day by using their gadgets it makes them more lazy and affects the cornea of the eyes.
Secondly, when any tedious task is given, people often search it on browsers and get the desired solution to their problem. This tactic will not only decrease the problem solving skills but also reduces the development and potential of creativity. To illustrate this, consider a case in which a student is told to write essay or develop any art from waste material. To solve this task, the facilitated pupil with internet, will just surf the websites and use the available idea, rather then using their own creativity to perform the activity.
However, I could not overlook the brighter side of technology. As the world wide web is upsurged, people are able to develop their connection to overseas. In addition to is, distance learning has also played a crucial role in escalating the knowledge. One can shop, pay bills, consult doctors, watch live events and can do innumerable thing on the giant web.
To recapitulate and offer my position, usage of technology and internet must be dynamic but only to be done when it is necessary and required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96864111498 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72350863812 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2778921215 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11596178227 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302083007396 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301585174849 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542593975267 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282108103362 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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