It is crystal-clear fact that life has been changing consistently since the world began. Some of us believe that life as now is much better than a century ago. I agree with the given statement to some extent because I think our life is affected by these alterations both positively and negatively. Besides, my personal view will be explained in the following paragraphs.
First of all, We have many chance in numerous fields in the modern globalization era and a lot of opportunity make our life easier than in the past. People of all ages take whatever they want and new technological developments provide convenience to our daily routine. For example, housewives do not spend much time to make their chore. They use dish washer, washing machine, vacuum cleaner to do housework. Another advantage is transportation area is improved than 100 years ago.
Government have put into service some different kind of transport vehicles and roads for their citizens no matter who live urban or rural places. It is known that Internet is the best invention of this century and then people living the other countries get in touch with each other easily. Moreover, the developed industry use new production methods, which save time and energy, which did not use in the past.
On the other hand, in the past, people ate organic foods and it gave long life span to them but today especially children prefer to fast foods which are harmful the healthy. Another example of negative changes is that the natural resources are in danger of extinction. If it goes like this, we will not have had enough resources to use by the time next 100 years.
To sum up, even if we have some drawbacks, we have lived in comfortable than people living ten decades ago. I think government and people should make provision for these issues and then we will live in better tomorrow.
- The maps show the village park 10 years ago and the village park now 79
- The table shows the percentage of very good rated by first year students 88
- The chart below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010. 84
- In your opinion, should young people choose their professions, or should their parents choose for them? 73
- Life now is better than it was 100 years ago To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 52
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, for example, i think, kind of, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62175394536 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8919800702 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5882352941 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147438884993 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484373016049 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463915968269 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787018672676 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430790498829 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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