Light corporal punishment is being reintroduced in school of uk. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it? Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Light corporal punishment is being reintroduced in school of uk. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it? Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Physical punishment is understood as any action that cause pain hurt , injury and discomfort to a child however light. Should light corporal punishment is reintroduced in schools of uk or not. In this eassy, i am going to examine this question from both point of view in upcoming paragraph.

On one side of the arguments there are people argue that, the light corporal punishment should be reintroduced in school. There are plethora of pros. Student is maintain the discipline in the class and maintain the decorum. They are paying full concentration in their study. Afterthat, it helps to build up their skills.as well as, children are puntual or learned the ethics.

On the other hand , it is also possible to make the opposing case.it is often argued that infact children are disrespected their teacher because student are not like the teacher when they punished student. So this method destroyed the relation of teacher or student. Student feel fear and they can not share their problem with there teacher for instance a survey conduct by canadian government an it proved that light corporal punishment distract the goals and achievment of students. Because they can not express their ideas and problems with their teacher due to f of punishment.ear

As we have seen there are number of answer to this questions on balance. However, i tend to believe that, the light corporal punishment should be baned and it is not reintroduced in uk and as well as, in other nations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97983870968 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69935992413 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9056106259 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218635584116 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865902798442 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119526866868 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154353968357 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750851121105 0.056905535591 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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