Describe the table and pie chart below which shows the spending habits of teenagers in australia The table shows the amount of dollars spent on various activities per week while the pie chat shows

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Describe the table and pie chart below which shows the spending habits of teenagers in australia. The table shows the amount of dollars spent on various activities per week while the pie chat shows

The given tabular chart, reveals the information about spent money by different years on the curricular activities,and the given pie chart depicts the knowlege spent money on study in different four categories. The given data is calibrated by dollars and pecentum. It is clear and coherent representation.

It can be clearly seen that, in the tabular representation in 2001 highest statistical money spent on food that was 150,and lowest was cosmetics that was 20. In entertainment and cosmetics were spent 35 and 20 dollars. Afterthat, in 2002 and 2003 the money spent were in different activities that were clothes, cosmetic, entertainment and food that were 100,102, 20,30,35,40and 160 in both years respectively.

The pie chart illustrates the information in per centum firstly, 55% money spent was in books. In addition, money spent were in projects, internet and memberships that were 18%, 24% and 3%.

Overall, highest money spent on food and lowest money spent on cosmetic in different three years those were drastically inclined, and the money spent was on books it was highest per centum. And low range amount spend on three per centum.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24864864865 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97353311676 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.1382609833 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114695817367 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056880076259 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446321125458 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085377891266 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282379122752 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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