Living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
As a result of rapid development, large cities are now facing serious problems with their environment. People are arguing that residence in these cities might cause various diseases to their body and I completely agree with this argument.
There are several reasons which resulted in this concerning health issues in big cities.
Firstly, due to more and more people are now moving to large cities in order for them to have more opportunities to find a better job, the increase in the number of vehicles is unavoidable. As a result of this, noise polluting and air polluting are now existing in every part of people daily life. For example, In Hanoi, there are thousands of motorcycles being use daily which caused a tremendous amount of emissions throughout the city.
Secondly, there are plenty of industrial factories had been built around modern cities which release their effluents directly into the water system without processing it. Due to this, the soil in the nearby areas are contaminated and all of the farmer’s crops are poisoned which will later be delivered to supermarkets and restaurants without everyone knowing about it even the farmer. These foods might lead to serious health diseases such as genetic modification or cancer. Moreover, releasing chemicals into the water system could even infect the entire city water, therefore millions of people will be affected by this destructive action. For instance, there used to be a foreign company in Vietnam which released their water waste into the people nearby water source which resulted in the death of thousands of fishes in that area.
In conclusion, I personally believe that while living in immense cities could benefit people, health problems should be taken into account when they decide to move to these areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...n the nearby areas are contaminated and all of the farmer's crops are poisoned which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16095890411 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61470528201 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4528333042 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.583333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201635823351 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074699995738 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420303447908 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116838029832 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328315447894 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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