Some people believe that if a police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence in that society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The increase in crime rate has resulted in plenty of problems for the society and the only way to stop this is to equip the police department with guns. While some people argue that this action might cause more violent in the society, I totally disagree with this argument.
First of all, since criminals are now becoming more and more dangerous, it is essential for police officers to have guns in order to enforce the law. Criminals are willing to fight back because they know that they have nothing to lose. If there were no firearms, the police would not be able to defend for themselves. For example, Drug dealers often carry heavy weapons in themselves in order to escape so police can only capture them by shooting.
Moreover, there are some difficult situations such as when a suspect capture hostages or in suicide bombers cases, the police must take them down in order for people to be safe. Guns are the statement of the law enforcements that they will never compromise with criminals and it became the leverage when they negotiate with lawbreakers. For example, when bank robbers were surrounded with fully equipped policemens they will be forced to surrender since it is impossible for them to escape without any casualties.
In conclusion, I believe that guns are only the tools for police to protect people when it is necessary and it will not affect the level of chaos in the society. Equipping police officers with firearms is the way to proctect themselves as well as ourselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82170542636 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49394435142 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550387596899 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.590632303 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.090909091 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20421474625 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829012353704 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761492999326 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145703126527 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937036152776 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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