Living in a country where you have to speak a foreigh language can cause serious social problems, as well as prctical peoblems.
To what extent do you agree or dis agree with this atatement.
We live in a World that is divided by cast, religion and culture. Various problem arises for a person living abroad. My views pertaining to this topic is shared stressing the fact that I firmly agree to the topic.
Firstly, people generally move out of their country either for education & carrier reasons. They may settle down in an entirely new location, which has certain rules that are followed in their society. Certain animals such as cows are considered sacred to Hindu religion. Whereas cow's meat is widely consumed across various countries. Similarly, mustard oil is preferred by many people in India, which is not widely available outside the country. People either have change to the oil available or should take it along with them. For Instance, when I went to Egypt for internship, I had to watch out for the type of food consumed there as beef and pork are commonly mixed with various food.
Secondly, in many Arabian countries there are rules involving walking with girls in streets. Men should keep their distance and should not show affection to his wife in public. Similarly, when a foreigner is indulged in such activities, he/she can either be executed or can be thrown behind bars for a long duration. The reason behind such action is that those people view link religion with such behaviors. For example, my friend almost landed up in jail because he was sitting too close to a girl and was caught by the police who were patrolling the area.
To put it in a net shell, when people travel outside their county, efforts should be taken to understand the rules, regulation and the culture that exists there and act accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re considered sacred to Hindu religion. Whereas cows meat is widely consumed across var...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84098939929 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43024077494 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621908127208 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4665943022 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0789861405719 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267960457617 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289691117351 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0497593392893 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424595815941 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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