The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar graph gives information about the proportion of families rent or own houses in united kingdom and wales countries between the years 1918 and 2011.
In general, it can be seen that, the per cent of families which owned homes increased gradually between 1918 and 1991 then markedly declined at the end of given period (2011). Another inmportant trend in the data is that, the percentage of families which rented houses fluctated during the given period.
To begin with, it can be witnessed, the proportion of households owned homes stood on around 22% in 1918. It grew up significantly to approximately 33 percent in 1953. After that, the percentage of families owned accommodation rose suddenly to around 68%, and 69% in 1991, and 2001 respectively. Then the percentage dropped slightly to approximately 64%.
Moving on households which rented accommodation, it can be noticed, the proportion of these families was around 77% in 1918. In 1953, the per cent grew down by approximately 9% (from 77% to 68%). In addition, the percentage of rented families fell down sharply to 31% in 2001. At the end of given period(2011) went up to around 35%.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, in addition, in general, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95360824742 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86420344739 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530927835052 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2990884379 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179576966645 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688180685848 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566921660621 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12608980346 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467590179323 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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