Language is a necessary tool to communicate not only in social life but also in practical aspects especially for people who lives abroad. I completely agree with this idea because of the following reasons.
First of all, it is undeniable that utilize a foreign tongue with native speaker have to pay attention on how to speak properly, otherwise the culture difference can cause abundance conflicts. However, there are multiple rules in different countries when talking to the elder. For instance, people can’t directly call their name instead of their society position in the most Asia countries, which means that if anyone broke those kinds of rules can come up with a serious social consequence. Even worse, the methods of immigrants to have a conversation is also simply judged by the local residents which can increase the opportunity for misunderstanding the personality by the first impression. Therefore, they need to deal with this situation appropriately to avoid harming their social life.
In addition, the language barriers can be an obstacle in the work place. If a person has a difficulty communicating with the colleges, he would less motivate and feel isolated at work. Furthermore, the high paid position in general requests the fluent language speaker which can provide the greatly productivity through the communicating at work. Accordingly, the people who lived oversea and lock of language ability will barely get the nice paycheck to maintain the high quality living conditions.
In conclusion, even though the most people in the world is able to speak second language, whereas language barriers is still a challenge for people who live abroad to get over.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 60
- Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families*To what extent do you agree or disagree*? 61
- Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87542207792 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.615955655 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206689395468 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717977651225 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313520264804 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116392047403 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418525909611 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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