Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Due to the spread of globalization, there has been a tendency that more and more people are starting to immigrate to the other country nowadays. Some people argue that living in a foreign country where you have to speak an additional language can cause not only serious social problems but also practical issues.
I agree with that idea the lives in a country where we do not well unable us to communicate with others spontaneously. There are two reasons why I agree with this idea
First of all, immigrants cannot understand how native speakers feel perfectly during the conversation with them. In my own experience, when I talk with English native speakers, I can understand what they are talking about, but I cannot make myself understood the subtle difference of word’s nuance such as “see”and “watch” specifically. Therefore, the perfect mutual understanding may be needed when we talk with foreigners
In addition, immigrants are not able to do work efficiently in a foreign country rather than their nationality. For example, immigrants from Japan are capable of doing both of presentation and tasks smoothly because they can utilize their mother language. On the other hand, immigrants from Japan is forced to speak foreign language such as English, French and Chinese in foreign countries, which can cause them to slow down their product efficiency because they are only permitted to speak additional languages.
To sum up,there is a possibility that a little difference between native speakers and immigrants can cause big problems. Perhaps it is needed to learn foreign languages more careful in case we do not face the bad situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, talking about, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25278810409 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05291612151 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4305462988 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.3 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321143104777 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122066661836 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102062475529 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168021391223 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784714127445 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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