Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People who are living in a foreign country where they have to use other languages rather than their own language can lead to serious social and practical problems. However, I believe that several benefits should also be considered. In this essay, both effects in social and practical problems including whether I will agree or not will be examined.
On the one hand, there are various serious social problems of living in a country using foreign language. Firstly, language barrier can be occurred between people since some country might use language in classifying the social status. For instance, in Thailand, public transportation like taxi, they will know that foreigners cannot read the information about rate in each route, therefore they will charge the prices twice times compared to Thai people rate. Furthermore, it might be hard to learn their culture which is important to get in group of friends. Learning in a local university, for example, foreign students should read a rule or listen to teachers about how to behave. As a consequent, it might be a trouble if some students cannot understand and do somethings against the rules.
On the other hand, some practical problems for people who living in different language speak can also happened. First of all, it is hard to communicate with local people since some country don’t use international language. One clear example is, In Japan, if we go to ask about how to travel by subway, we have to use translated tools like smart phone in order for Japanese people to understand which is extremely hard to live. Finally, problems in work and study is another example challenge for those people as they have to adapt with the courses and documents which all written in local language.
In conclusion, even though serious social and practical problems can be occurred to those who living in country where they have to speak a foreign language, I thoroughly argue against this statement. If people have a chance to spend their life in different language and culture, they will have a greater chance to improve their living skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...ng in different language speak can also happened. First of all, it is hard to communicat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03151862464 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61523759079 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495702005731 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8731462184 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232248069701 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857988066024 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876834728292 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16901999585 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697603034927 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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