Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
It is often said that, the world becomes small village and no difference between nations. However, moving to another country and speaking another language may imply to unexpected reactions. I strongly agree the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs to conclude a reasonable conclusion.
On the one hand, traveling to another country for study or work and speaking another language may cause some noticeable problems. Moreover, misunderstanding between native speakers and foreigners who speak their language can lead to remarkable problems such as failure in university or losing money in businesses. For example, a study has been conducted in one of the developed country showed that the rate of foreigners who can speak the language of this country in fluently way is so low. In addition, most of foreigners face a huge difficulties in pronunciation. As consequence, it is a better to study or work in a country which speak the same language of yours.
On the other hand, not only working or studying abroad may cause a important problems in communication, but also may lead to social problems such as isolation feeling. Furthermore, when someone lives in another country which speaks non understandable language for him , this can lead to psychological problems and imply to suicide. For instance, a research was conducted in Germany in 1995, this research illustrated that, the percentage of suicide cases between foreigners who face difficulties in learning German language is markedly high.
Taking everything into consideration, working or studying oversees for those people who can not have ability to learn anther language is an inadvisable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32706766917 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09977082438 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.808751104 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261607276613 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942500494164 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063557537962 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141571394186 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826841046206 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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