There are many advantages associated with the technology in every sphere of life. Some people deem that because computers are now taking place of libraries' features, managing free community libraries is a totally waste money. I disagree with this argument and will extend my views in the essay further.
To commence with, there are several compelling reasons why public libraries is still needed for human. Firstly, many students who are not able to spend money on personal computers and therefore using libraries they easily gain information and knowledge. Also, this is cheapest way to get any books from any subject. Another point is that, in rural areas where is limited to accessible, community libraries is main source of information. Furthermore, sometimes there is no tranquil and salubrious atmosphere anywhere in the world. But there is an absolute silence in libraries at all. Considering all these facts, public libraries has so many advantages.
In the contrary, internet is not reliable source of information. There is too much details on the internet, thus people are not differentiate which information is fake or real. Also, everyone can put anything unnecessary put into the internet, that is not useful sometimes and there is no certified verification of this post. Consequently, chances of detrimental or irrelevant information is pretty high. However, one such widely important facility of internet is that time convenience and people get information easily anywhere.
To conclude, although internet has made information readily available, still books are trustable source of information as they written by well-known or famous authors or writers. Hence, government should continue spend money on the libraries as they are essential source of information.
- Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss about views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'totally waste money'.
Suggestion: totally waste money
...s, managing free community libraries is a totally waste money. I disagree with this argument and will...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the cheapest'.
Suggestion: is the cheapest
...n information and knowledge. Also, this is cheapest way to get any books from any subject. ...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ble source of information. There is too much details on the internet, thus people ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49454545455 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95548013188 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2869600585 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8823529412 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149018024784 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437356385434 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528189663439 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932054436953 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080247285446 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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