Nowadays, due to increasing in population various problems can be occurred in society.Youngster living in metro cities can survive so many issue.The problem behind this and possible measurement can be discussed further.
There are so many issue which are faced by adults who reside in town.The first major difficulty is the cut-throat competition for a decent post.In the city a job opportunity is more than the countryside,so people are migrated towards the cities and due to this trend the ratio of literacy and multilingual people has surged in the metro area.For this reason job vacancy had smaller number and candidate for application number was twice for positions.moreover,it is indeed true that city life has always been fast and hectic.so they had issue in to maintain the balance between professional career as well as personal relationship.This will led to distortion of family life.also add to this,high living expenses is detrimental hitched.
There are several measurement which can be taken by the ruling body to vanish this trouble from society.firstly, government should encourage the multinational company and business sector to established their whole setup out side of the city and also provide some incentive for those company who started their business in far out of town.whereas,this lead to the reverse migration but only not also it rapidly decrease in the unemployment in metropolis.Additional, build the university in village therefore they can save time to commute to high school.Moreover, they provided some stimulant for adults group to save their money and additionally help their part time job.such as the low cost of bus passes for them.The apt example this is India,in Indian government they always had a concession for student and workers who daily commute for work and job as well.
- Full time university students spend most of the time studying They should be doing other activities too To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- The major cities in the world are growing fast as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in cites are facing with? Give solutions to their problems. 56
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sector to established their whole setup out side of the city and also provide some incen...
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...daily commute for work and job as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34027777778 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.347423922 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 96.0 20.2975951904 473% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 277.284851532 49.4020404114 561% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 512.666666667 106.682146367 481% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 96.0 20.7667163134 462% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 7.06120827912 425% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129984297489 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852228194917 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0115840831057 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852228194917 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115840831057 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.7 13.0946893788 395% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -34.42 50.2224549098 -69% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.9 11.3001002004 371% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.88 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.78 8.58950901804 149% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.4 10.1190380762 399% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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