Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.
As major cities are developing at an alarming rate, more and more young people also choose to move there, hoping to pursue a better life. This essay will discuss the problems of this phenomenon and suggest some solutions.
The high cost of living and social isolation can be two major challenges young citizens in populated cities face. Chief among these is the constant rise of prices. The inflation rate in many cities has rocketed over the past few years, thus making it harder for young adults to pay for accommodation, transportation, and other necessities. Another problem that young people may face is the sense of isolation. Despite the dense population in megacities, most people are too busy to care for others, which can lead to feelings of loneliness and social isolation. All these problems can make it harder for young people to maintain life in big cities.
However, there are many solutions to alleviate the situation. Regarding the increasing cost of living in big cities, governments should encourage landlords to create housing initiatives and rent controls for young residents. Another solution worth mentioning is that governments need to increase public transportation options and subsidies for young citizens. Moreover, we should support programs offering financial literacy and budgeting education to help young students live more comfortably in large cities. Turning to social isolation, fostering community engagement through local events and activities is necessary. Furthermore, we can also take advantage of the technical advances, developing online platforms for citizens to connect and make friends. Encouraging neighborhood-based initiatives to create mutual interaction is also important, thus building a sense of belonging.
In conclusion, even though living in cities as young people can lead to many problems such as a high cost of living and social isolation, there are many solutions that we can do to help improve the current situation and make it easier for young residents to live in fast-growing cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42946708464 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95145352629 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561128526646 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8209799598 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283569011191 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883185773848 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835216250266 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190624959234 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07355085655 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.