The higher demand of people, the more the world develops. It seems to be a widespread concern on these days that growing metropolises are accompanied by some problems, which incidentally leads to obstacles for youngsters living in urban areas. There are several problems related to this trend. However, solutions can be taken to mitigate those potential issues.
There are a number of problems related to this trend. The main issue is the higher unemployment rates. This is caused by the immigration of young people from rural areas to urban areas. As those labourers are amateur, to get a well-paid job is hard for them due to their lack of skills and experience. Hence, many of them are unemployed. According to a recent research, in 2018, the proportion of unemployed youngsters in Vietnam accounted for 49,4 percent of the total number of the unemployed. Another dilemma is that people are at a higher risk of mental problems. Living in a competitive world, they have to spend most of their time working to deal with high living costs, which can cause anxiety and spiritual illnesses.
However, there are several actions that could be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, what the government should do is to provide education and vocational training for young people so as they are well-equipped with knowledge and skills to get a suitable job and earn a stable income. Secondly, by raising awareness of a work-life balanced routine among young people, they will be willing to take part in other entertaining activities besides working and focus more on a balanced lifestyle, which is an ideal way to relieve stress and pressure. Thirdly, discussions on budgeting and stress management should be organized regularly that youngsters know how to manage their life financially and mentally.
In conclusion, the continued growth of big cities are causing problems for their citizens including unemployment and mental illnesses. However, diverse measures can be enforced to tackle the problems that are certain to arise.
- Some animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reason? What solution to solve them? 73
- Societies would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purposes, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree? 89
- The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development? 61
- The bar chart shows the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 countries in Europe in 2005, 2009 and 2015, compared with the European average. Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, incidentally, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16717325228 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81300709807 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9896695894 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304674180387 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078156425496 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593266849107 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178139590647 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455597769607 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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