Male leaders have brought a lot of troubles and issues to the world such as violence and wars. Some people believes that world can be managed better and the world can become more peaceful if women become leaders. To what extent do you agree?
It can be seen a plenty of problems in the world caused by male leadership such as conflict and violence. Some people have faith in female leaders that they can handle any situation orderly and create peaceful environment. I completely concur with this statement as women have the potential to be resilient and they are benevolent as well as caring by nature.
Firstly, women are more flexible than men to remain calm in tough situations. To be a good leader, the person needs to have ability to deal with any circumstances positively and be conscious about changes because in politics change is inevitable. Female representatives have more courage to cope with those situations in an effective way. For example, in COVID-19 pandemic, women led nations are more successful to control the outbreak of disease than their counterparts. Furthermore, female can tolerate stress and pain with patience, this helps them to be a great leader for the nation.
Secondly, women have god gifted virtue such as generosity and carefulness, which are significant characteristics for a good leader to understand and respect others’ opinion. By having these qualities, they can be closed with public and empathize their needs and emotions. They care about the whole population of the country as they take care of their family. In addition, we can rarely find evidence of ruthless female leaders but there are many female representatives, have reflected the society and think about the development and welfare of inhabitants. The former prime minister of India Indira Gandhi, for instance, she supported freedom of country and minimized the birth rate by family planning to prevent people suffering from hunger.
In conclusion, some individuals believe that country led by females can be more peaceful and harmonious than countries directed by opposite gender and I agree, women are preferable to men to drive the nation due to their resilient personality and kind and supportive behaviour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28391167192 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91549898698 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580441640379 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2136625083 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.642857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250254517106 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868988259324 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582845997159 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162446835596 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623144407751 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.