The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from suberbs or the countryside to live in the cities.To what extent do yu agree or disagree?
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It is argued that relocating people from outside of the urban area or countryside to the cities is an impressive idea in order to control traffic and vehicle problems. However, I completely disagree with this statement because moving towards city increases congestion and demand for means of transportation exceed drastically.
Firstly, migration of suberbs people makes cities overcrowded automatically by rising numbers of residents. This leads to more busy roads as every individuals uses either public or private vehicles and people often get stuck on traffic jam. As a result, they would not be able to reach on time to committed places. Kathmandu city is the prime example to elaborate this, where residents often face the problem of getting delay for workplace due to massive jam.
Another reason to contradict given argument is demand for transportation would be higher than the availability. Public vehicles are economical and people prefer using it so, access of local transportation need to be extended. Also, the number of private vahicle users rises to next level to commute from one place to another regarding work, study and other essential purposes. For instance, the proportion of school children and college students multiply and the amount of school and college buses have to be enlarged. Hence, it arouses as a problem rather than being a solution.
In conclusion, although traffic congest and transportation issues are growing, they can not resolve by motivating people to live in cities. Even it might cause more terrible situations in relating to road trafficking and use of vehicles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n to contradict given argument is demand for transportation would be higher than ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31640625 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88070245865 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1463428761 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207114751237 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661929537972 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574924515253 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12334250922 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564967121597 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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