Many believe that advertising can have negative effects on customers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising is spreading quickly and become the first resource to promote products, either on billboards, television or social media. Some people believe that advertising can have negative impacts on the buyers, while others disagree and think the opposite.
On one hand, several people think that many advertisements will affect negatively on customers life. First, promotions attract people to purchase un-need products, where they spend their money randomly. Second, some advertisement is for unhealthy things, that may cause health problems such as fast food, energy drinks or alcohol. Moreover, these days advertising impact badly on children’s character, thinking and attitude, due to immortal marketing. For example, energy drink companies, use power and adventure to show customers how strong they will be if they drink it. In my opinion I agree where promotions should be realistic, and government must observe rightly, what it is advertising.
On the other hand, some people think that advertising attract customers and is the best way for promotion. First, the easiest service for people to stay up to date to the latest trending, such as technology and clothes, is advertisement and encourage the manufacture to sell their products. Second, advertising facilitates people lives, to buy and search for items, especially these days the availability of social media and online shops. However, promotion will increase the marketing and investment particularly in infrastructure sector and encourage people and investors to buy. For example, mobile companies, put their load to show the customer, what are the features of the mobile and what can it done to satisfy them. From my side I disagree where we should know what to do buy and be sure from the source and if the advertisement isn’t a spam.
In conclusion, some people agree that advertising will cause problems, others believe that promotion is the best way to introduce products for people and won’t impact negatively. In my opinion, I think that advertising can be done in an attractive and real way, that won’t harm people and causes negative effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...dvertisements will affect negatively on customers life. First, promotions attract people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42089552239 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94469101404 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534328358209 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3959631935 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198023000571 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708206801782 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681125516712 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140762503019 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446662626066 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.