Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Vaccines play an important role in preventing diseases such as COVID-19, etc. Therefore, some parents support vaccination to fight diseases, however, others do not agree with that because of the side-effect of vaccines. This essay will take a look at the two sides, which one is pro-vaccination, and another one is anti-vaccination.
On the one hand, in 2020, COVID-19 was one of the dangerous pandemics that led to the death of many people. Because of that, vaccines have been released, and they have been attracted by the government and civilization. Many pro-vaxxers even have knowledge about the advantages of vaccines. To make it more detailed, when it injects into the body, it contains good bacteria, as well as an immune system response against pathogens. After that, the second dose is the most effective in avoiding viruses infiltrating the body because the first dose is a dose that antigens have been creating immune system, but not potent as the second dose. Indeed, vaccines have a positive effect on children so they need to vaccinate to protect themselves, also their parents, and the community. Consequently, the proportion of COVID-19 cases will decline steadily. However, unvaccinated people will have a disease seriously because of a severe virus and strong transmission.
On the other hand, in contrast to the pros of vaccines, one issue is causing intense side effects such as fever and runny nose, therefore, some anti-vaxxers completely oppose them. They believe that vaccines bring about more viruses because they can mimic real pathogens. According to the news, some vaccinated people have fainted and died due to the vaccine virus.
In conclusion, personally, people should support vaccination, although it causes side effects, they can not deny it because of creating an immune system to prevent pathogens. As a result, the more people believe in the advantage of vaccines, the fewer diseases cases are. Yet, another one does not believe the vaccines will have diseases and easily transmit to the community. In addition, children should be allowed to vaccinate enough doses, despite the side effect of vaccines because without vaccination, they are easily transmitted from their parents and they should be protected themselves against COVID-19 viruses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, look, second, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30939226519 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86479937973 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527624309392 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1206751298 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.777777778 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186664599151 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596411373904 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611346011901 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118180268999 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806066016663 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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