The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people's freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.
Nowadays, the economy develops along with the production of cigarettes. Many people including teenagers want to express themselves by smoking, yet they do not know the disadvantage of cigarettes. This essay will take a look at some reasons for the influence of smoking.
To begin with, smoking has an impact on human health, especially for people who actively smoke. Because the cigarette contains some nicotine and harmful gas, those toxic components affect the respiratory system directly. Thus, if they smoke a lot, perhaps they have to suffer lung cancers in the long run. For example, some men always drink alcohol and smoke everyday, and the proportion of gas stagnates in their lungs so they cope with the period of cancers leading to death. Not also that, smoking in public places influences other surrounding people who unfortunately smell the gas of cigarettes. Especially, pregnant women's and children's health need to be prioritized, however, if they smell that gas, it is likely that it descends to their lung leading to cancers. According to the statistics, about 60% of rising risks of lung cancers, primarily among children and pregnant women.Therefore, it is possible that smoking has a huge effect on human health.
Furthermore, some smoking people create freedom in public places without being aware of the surrounding people and the environment, the chemical gas gives off air pollution, which causes global warming if the temperature increases up to over 30 degrees. Unless the government ban smoking, the environment becomes more polluted and is not controlled.
In conclusion, due to the huge consequence of smoking, the government should ban the restrictions on smoking. The less gas in cigarettes decreases, the cleaner and more civilized the environment becomes, and the percentage of lung cancers is declined to keep the health of people, especially children and pregnant women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3178807947 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90989338233 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.296819984 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212320011601 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712205298072 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593026151472 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124374560328 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403844592854 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.