Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
Prevention is better than cure.Vaccines act as a preventive measure from acquiring diseases.Childhood diseases such as polio can be prevented through vaccines.Thus I feel that some people's argument on making child's vaccination legal for parents is highly justified.
Not every disease has a preventive measure.So its better if the government makes the vaccination compulsory for parents to prevent their children from further adversities.There are diseases which have no cure,once they attack children, such as dengue,polio.So prevention is the only way to put children off the disease track.
Legalisation of vaccination would help illiterates by guiding them on the other hand .People who can not afford a healthy and a balanced diet would not be a prey to deadly diseases if immunization is made compulsory.In addition to just passing the law,it would be great if government follows up.
Some diseases such as tumor,AIDS do not have a prevention till date.Atleast getting immunized from diseases which have prevention would be really helpful for people.And unless getting immunized is made unavoidable such kind of prevention is not guaranteed.
Nothing can be compared to the prevention of a disease.Though the government provides perks,facilities to disease sufferers now,prevention of the disease is highly recommended.For instance a poor and healthy child is always considered better than a wealthy but diseased child
Thus,though some people argue that individuals have the right to not getting their kids immunized,I feel it should be a mandatory affair in human interest.I also feel that the government should provide free immunizing tools for economically backward sections just to not burden them.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256227758007 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.188612099644 0.155533422707 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113879003559 0.0946595960268 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0604982206406 0.0501214627716 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0355871886121 0.0437548338989 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113879003559 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0569395017794 0.0403226058552 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.42090171396 2.80594681477 122% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284697508897 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00355871886121 0.00163938923432 217% => OK
Determiners: 0.0925266903915 0.0861772015684 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0320284697509 0.021408717616 150% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106761565836 0.011925033212 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1797.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.93822393822 6.12580529183 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.428571428571 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.351351351351 0.28420135186 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.258687258687 0.203846283523 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.196911196911 0.137316102897 143% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42090171396 2.80594681477 122% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 58.5843024223 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 51.8 20.7743622355 249% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 124.888109922 49.517814964 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 359.4 127.492653851 282% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.8 20.7743622355 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 0.814263465372 295% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 3.99599198397 801% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 86.9351351351 49.1944974215 177% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.69124875643 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384973155143 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.193641738413 0.102741220458 188% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0059633750249 0.0668466124924 9% => Sentences are so close to each other.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 4.79671169333e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21202177164 0.134430193775 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696405605476 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.158821819034 0.324371583561 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0173303235254 0.0638462369009 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2007219939 0.228012699653 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572815836594 0.058150111329 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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