Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? State your opinion.
There is an opinion that working experience for children is essential from parents’ point of view. To certain extent it is true: it will give children the possibility to develop their responsibility and discipline, as well as give them extra money for their expenses. However, it is essential to identify, which jobs are safe for children and from which age it is okay for youngsters to work.
The development of specific characteristics and the rightful usage of earnings could be beneficial for children. All of these could make children empowered and more motivated. For instance, during summer and winter breaks within the period of middle school I was given the opportunity from my father to sell milk in neighborhood. This job motivated me to be more active in my life and helped me to understand the simple notion of budget allocation.
Nevertheless, not all jobs are suitable for children and it is important to understand from what age children could work. There a lot of cases in developing countries when parents encourage children to work from young age and help to sustain their household. This kind of pattern could be hazardous for well-being of those children as parents in some cases do not take into account the influence of children’s colleagues. For instance, it is very easy for adults to give working children not the safest part of the job, as well as deceive them with paycheck due to the absence of knowledge about wage levels.
To conclude, working children is very delicate matter in nowadays and parents should be ready to face difficulties from various sources. Responsible and disciplined children with their own budget could be more successful in life in comparison with others. However, not all jobs could be done by children and parents should carefully choose at what age their children could work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...orking children is very delicate matter in nowadays and parents should be ready to face dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, kind of, as well as, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01960784314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82379416575 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519607843137 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0642169839 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263321163577 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111136325954 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060075539748 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180033942117 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625682533387 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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