Many children these days have their own mobile phone. What are the advantage and disadvantage yet.
it is true that much of the student have use their own smart phone in daily life.This essay will explain the benefits and negative impact of this device.
To begin with,there are several merits of cell phone in student's life. First and Foremost advantage is that it is aid the children to solve the complex problem of the subject. To explain, it has made calculation easy for student and help them to learning new english vocabulary words because multifarious app available on mobile device which especially prepare for youngster. In addition, internet surfing and communication also present in smart phone which help them to visiting different website for gaining the knowledge and contact with other international student. For example, recent survey of Moscow university revealed that nine out of ten topper student get support from smart phone for obtaining better marks.Hence, it is proved that cell phone is the best way for gaining information as well as education for today generation.
Although, mobile phone has become essential part of today generation, it is also distribute hazardous influence on infinity. Weak health is major harmful impact on children. To explicate it has made habit of the child who spent most of time on it which responsible many health relative disease in their body such as eyesight issue, lack of sleep and so on. Despite of benefits in study, it is also distribute the concentration level of student who run it as a way of entertainment. For instance, World health organization published that today generation face more disease than past century cause of mobile equipment. Thus, it is directly effect on study and health.
In conclusion, If student use cell phone with limit, it will show extra ordinary impact on student's career. otherwise it can destroy the health and education of the student.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10631229236 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74845420332 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6337106275 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142406607947 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482884868322 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394735462546 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087360512372 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410686853524 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.