Some people think that students should attend college after finished high school, whereas others feel that they should stay one year before go to college.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It has been seen that students take admission immediately in graduation after completing schooling, but some believe that children should take rest for a year before next class. In my opinion, gap is convenient for child's brain and knowledgeable. this essay will explain the both side of this statement.
To commence with, there are numerous benefits to hold a break. Firstly, adult feel more freshness and get experience the new things in the world, because infant have better chance to reducing the burden from long study which is best oppurtunity for them to increase their concentration level and they can survive their life according to their wish and try to complete it. Secondly, leap time of education can bring chance to visit the new site of the global which assist them to learning diverse culture and make connection with people. For example, the recent survey of education department of india,showed that young got efficient academic result after education break. Hence, it is the best way to rising up the information about the person.
Although, it is benefical to improving the knowledge, it can obtain difficulty for adult to continue further qualification. Since forget the education after long break of the study. For instance, college student provided superior grade than gap infant. Therfore, if student begin their study without any break they will easily maintain further education in university.
In the conclusion, Despite of harmful influence of study, interval is the greatest way to observe the reality of the world and gaining the realisation which cannot acquire from book.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22868217054 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69086338346 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647286821705 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8788469742 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105978489598 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033742820624 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423862909735 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616417793988 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543991363759 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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