People have different views about whether residential buildings and official blocks should be built under certain regulations. From the point where I stand, while these constructions can satisfy the demand of many individuals and companies, I tend to feel the negatives of this outweigh its positives in many ways.
To most cities, buildings are an integral part of the cityscape. With few controls, designers and architectures will be given more freedom to create stylish buildings creatively, and these works are more likely to account for the landmarks or tourist attractions in each city and attracted millions of people to visit every year, which also bring considerable revenue to the city along with the tourists. For example, the unique Hui-style architecture in my hometown, featuring white walls, black tiles and exquisite carvings, has made Anhui a popular place to visit. As a result, it also boosts the city’s tourism economy. By contrast, if all houses have to be built following the same style, it would be a little boring, which will contribute less to the cityscape, let alone the money from visitors.
Apart from the aforementioned benefits are the massive drawbacks the construction may cause to both the city and its citizens. Firstly, less regulation can compromise safety. If the authorities do not tend to supervise the building process, there can be houses with poor constructions which are not safe enough for people to live in. Secondly, many buildings with bizarre exteriors will make the locals feel uncomfortable and furthermore, they are likely to ruin the overall layout of the area. Finally, the government will find it difficult to conduct standardized maintenance work because each property has a different style, and to make it happen takes a lot of work and money.
In conclusion, although there are clear advantages of fewer controls for accommodations and architectures, it is necessary for authorities to regulate the standard of each construction.
- Some people say that with the development of modern technology printed books newspapers and magazines lose their importance To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 82
- It has been said that people who read for pleasure have more developed imaginations and language skills than people who prefer to watch TV Do you agree or disagree 90
- It is the responsibility schools to teach good behavior in addition to providing formal education To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
- Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year SOme people argue the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth Do you agree or disagree 51
- In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a situation? 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32176656151 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00974808357 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.235151829 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.769230769 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174888462432 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566506917617 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353008498788 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979519923991 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285936964905 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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