Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some large firms sponsor major sporting events to advertise their products. Some people believe that this has many positive aspects, while others argue about the negative aspects of this issue. In my opinion, when sports are supported by companies, both sides will receive great benefits.
On the one hand, for athletes, it is fortunate that they are sponsored by businesses. The budget that the government provides for sports is limited, which gives athletes several financial problems. Sponsors can resolve these issues with funding sources. Moreover, supported athletes may have some opportunities to develop their talents. The money provided can be used to improve equipment or have many training trips abroad or to hire senior experts. That sport will also have the opportunity to attract more talents. The athletes also have the opportunity to work at these companies themselves after the competition. It's great that sports are sponsored by big enterprises.
On the other hand, sponsored businesses also receive a lot of profits when they choose sports as the field to advertise. Fans of many sports will be huge potential customers for companies with their products. Printing product images on athletes' uniforms or accessories is a way to easily reach customers. Advertising in gymnasiums or stadiums is also a way to make people know more about their products. For example, it's a great good time to promote a product at football matches that have hundreds of millions of followers.
To conclude, sports advertising offers many benefits for both sponsors and sports companies.
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- Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages.Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...more about their products. For example, its a great good time to promote a product ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34661354582 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7108970314 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581673306773 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2484567313 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.9411764706 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239539778384 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760934121095 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513243385051 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172081250922 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516643159965 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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