In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that states should have the duty about childhood obesity. Personally, I disagree with this opinion.
Limiting childhood obesity is not responsibility of the government but duty of children’s parents. Parents are able to control weight and habits of their children easier than the government. There are several reasons why children are becoming obesity and unhealthy. Firstly, eating much fast foods makes children to become overweight and who leads to multiple health such as cardiopathy or diabetes. Fast foods almost contain high fat. Parents are recommended to cook healthy food for their children and who teach their children how to cook. Secondly, a sedentary lifestyle lead to the childhood obesity. In the modern world, children usually play video game or watch TV instead of being physical activities. This leads to excess calories are not burned. Parents are able to limit the obesity of their children by spending time playing outdoor with their children.
Although limiting childhood obesity is not responsibility of the government but the government may take measures to curb the childhood obesity. Firstly, the government may ban dealer to sell food which contain high fat and high sugar around schools. Secondly, the government may introduce sugar tax to crack down on high sugar levels in soft drinks. This indirectly limits childhood obesity. In addition, the government is able to require schools to organize physical activities for student.
In conclusion, I firmly hold the view that the government do not have responsibility for childhood obesity because this is responsibility of children’s parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5625 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92007537745 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54296875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4953048538 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161202237531 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521650170105 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419203211006 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102559877414 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253422684584 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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