In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern life, the problem of obesity and unhealthiness is one of the top concerns, especially for children. There are some opinions that say the government must take responsibility for this problem. However, I totally disagree with this point of view because of some reasons.
Firstly, we have to wonder what factors lead to this condition. Due to the speedy growth of digital technology, children have more reasons to stay at home, they have many entertainment equipment. This situation is the reason for lack of outdoor activities and exercises at kids, the main factor of overweightness. The next common reason is the rampant appearance of fast food and gas drinks. Youngsters are easily attracted by these unhealthy foods so obesity is unavoidable.
It is obvious to me that parents should take care of their children’s health, not the government. Children spend most of their time with family so parents are the best personal trainer for their health. Parents can be the guardian to witness their child do the exercises, besides that provide them with healthy food. Meals of the kid are usually prepared by family members so the nutrients contained are easier to control. Another reason for my statement is that youngsters often take their parents as the role model for their life. If they see their parents have a healthy life, they would want to be the same.
In conclusion, parents have to take responsibility for their kids health to make sure that every children have the best condition for growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun entertainment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much entertainment', 'a good deal of entertainment'.
Suggestion: much entertainment; a good deal of entertainment
...more reasons to stay at home, they have many entertainment equipment. This situation is the reason...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, so, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03968253968 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73715189639 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.054426824 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151210331095 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537899273011 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438245293315 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103318751626 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365158364765 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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