In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for laerning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion on this?
Nowadays so many children invovled in different kind of work.It proves very good for the development of children, but sometimes paid work is harmful for children in many ways.I will explore the dimensions of this topic from both point of veiws and shape up my opinion by the end.
First and foremost it proves very advantages for childern because if children is doing paid work,children can learn the hand work load easier and it is good at managing their schedule.They can pay their fees of any different activities they wants to do. They also can pay their fee of university without ask their parents.It will decrease the work load of their parents.They know the meaning of hard work also.
On the flip side,childern are always doing some low paid job which is not relates with their studies like washing dishes, cleaning floors and serving foods in restaurants. It is not providing any useful skills which they can use in their career. Doing paid work while studying will affect thier studies and they spend too much time on the jobs so they have no time for doing homeworks and other creative work which are important for future. They also have no enough time for self study,researches.
To sum up, paid works are important for taking responsibilities in the family they can understand how difficult is earn money,but it totally impacts bad on their studies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88841201717 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67703841159 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592274678112 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4051103169 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.375 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.125 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224884859668 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980238198145 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752345839825 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150038722713 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059717985499 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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