Children are the backbone of a nation and it is quite obvious that they play an immense role in the holistic development of the country. However, obesity in children is an issue of concern in ample of nations that results in many health problems in teenagers. There are myriad of reasons are associated with this problem and these can be solved by taking certain measures.
To embark with, why children are becoming more and more obese; the first reason is the change in diet habits. Children prefer to eat junk food like pizza, noodles, pasta and many more instead of a healthy diet, such as fruits, green vegetables, milk, cheese and so on. The fast foods are flooded with high calories and available every nook and corner of the country. When children consume the food filled with a high proportion of bad cholesterol, it results in a rise in cholesterol level in the blood and ultimately increase the weight. For instance, a recent survey conducted by the World Health Organisation illustrates that the number of obese children is rising at an alarming rate and the obesity is the main cause of health problems such as diabetes, blood pressure, heart diseases in the early childhood age.
Every problem has its solution and the issue of overweight children can also be solved. One solution of this problem is to encourage children to have a healthy diet and to do a lot of physical activities. Children can indulge in outdoor games which helps them to remain physically fit and more active. Moreover, fruits and green vegetables can help juveniles to grow, stay strong and healthy, to get energy to do work and play games. For example, if teenagers have a balance food and encouraged to participate in sports games, instead of becoming couch potatoes, it will help them to be more energetic and lose weight. As a result, the obesity in children can be reduced.
To conclude, nevertheless, obesity in children causing some negative effects on the growth of any nation, this issue can be resolved by taking appropriate steps.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
.... To begin with, most of young children are depending on them parents to cook food because th...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...o cook. Secondly, street food is famous every where in the world. It is cheap in rate but h...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ing interest they will be safe learner. Moreover walk or doing some exercise in morning ...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...ng reduce their fat percentage and they feels more active everyday. For other more wa...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t percentage and they feels more active everyday. For other more watching cookery shows ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99176954733 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45049202722 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5633705323 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104440052008 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03325344521 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266686483812 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602762820842 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182746571551 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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