The issue of whether the government should spend funds on railroads or highways is a moot point for society nowadays, some people believe that the roadways are more advantageous than the railways. According to my belief, railways are a better mode of transportation than any other way.
Firstly, allocating public funds in establishing and improving railways will decrease the mortality rate as this mode of commuting is environmentally friendly and it releases less carbon dioxide which will reduce diseases like cancer, migraine, respiratory illness etc. In other words, the citizens of the nation will enjoy a healthy lifestyle. For example, findings of a research conducted by Delhi university shows that constructing metro trains have reduced the pollution by 28% and which indirectly has improved the health of people.
Secondly, The development of railways have a direct impact on the economic development of the nation, it will increase the employment opportunities for the people. By making sure that the facility of the railway is available to everyone the officials should try to build rail tracks in each and every corner of the country. For instance, a study in China has revealed that after improving railroads rate of unemployment decreased in developing countries as the majority of people got employed in this sector which leads to improvement in their way of living.
To summarize, the government has to take initiative to develop railways though it is burdensome in the matter of finance but it will have a positive impact on the country as it will increase the economic growth and as well as improve the standard of living of people.
- Many people work long hours leaving very little time for leisure activities Does this situation have more advantages or have more disadvantages 84
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems 56
- Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like the very much Why do people take part in dangerous sports Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers 56
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
- In many countries children are getting fatter and less fit day by day Why is it so and suggest solutions 58
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2052238806 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92320920194 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9816659907 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5555555556 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109349703041 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462151794998 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364102560805 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072297278669 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437322832669 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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