in this modern era, a majority of people want to become famous. Some players are playing extreme and dangerous game. this essay will discuss the main reasons why people play dangerous sports and suggest best ways to reduce this games.
To begin with, the main reason why people play this dangerous sports is that they like to taking risks. They like to challenge their ability. Firstly, they push them selves each and every day they feel satisfied when they performs dangerous sports like boxing, riding mountain bikes and so on. Secondly if they perform very well then they get a fame and sometimes so many chances to win huge money and different prices this prices build them confidence to perform next task well. Finally, After performing they get attention by doing stunts on motorcycles and jumping from huge buildings they create a headlines in newspapers and in television news channels
The solutions are not simple , while doing some stunts they have to keep safety equipment and experts. Moreover perform all the stunts after taking proper instructions and proper training. Some companies have to require a license for providing such training.
In my opinion, people do such sports for fun, however some sports performed after sufficient training.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14563106796 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35310831013 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0672977633 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3636363636 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293504452424 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127682105461 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104032153442 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186746342101 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746108996955 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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