In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.
The grow of living conditions in certain countries has become a positive signal to many individuals, and the whole society . However, accompanying such trend is the rising of the costs of living. This has several effects on citizens and governments in general.
To begin with, not all of the inhabitants are able to afford the growing cost of living. Due to the fact that there are several poor and homeless people living in many part of the world. Since those cannot pay for the basic cost of living, most of them are founded to have poor living conditions including famish or lack of accomodations. For instance, wandering down some streets in Manhattan, it is not strange to notice some sleeping on the pavement. The poor and homeless can be seen in streets of metropolitan like New York or Las Vegas partly because these people cannot afford the costs of living. Therefore, a demand for problems-solving is rather urgent.
Resolution for such problem is, in my point of view, the government should enact a new legislation to support residents who money is not sufficient to pay for the expense of living by abating the expense. By virtue of such action, the poor and the homeless may have an opportunity of a better living conditions. Moreover, fund-raising can be applied in this situation as this method will ensure the benefits of individuals as well as the fairness of the society.
In conclusion, I deem that the increase in the costs of living has brought negative effect to individuals who having economy shortage. Nonetheless, government can interfere to such state by helping those in financial aspect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
The grow of living conditions in certain countri...
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Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... many individuals, and the whole society . However, accompanying such trend is the...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...nments in general. To begin with, not all of the inhabitants are able to afford the grow...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'many parts'.
Suggestion: many parts
...eral poor and homeless people living in many part of the world. Since those cannot pay fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93772893773 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85251374654 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4482999297 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220884279258 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728850745383 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508497153386 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140339136583 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385343890426 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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