In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.
Nowadays, when the living conditions in many countries has been increased, so as the costs of living. Although this trend is considered beneficial, it also has some effects on the human beings.
To begin with, the rising of the living costs may be affordable to certain classes, but not to all society. As general knowledge, there are still several homeless and poor people in the society. It is not difficult to catch up with an homeless man who sleeps in the street of New York city every nights or various cases of disabilities wandering on the street of Vietnam begging for food or money. One of the major problems which contributes to such issue is because of the exuberant costs of living. Clearly, with the poor, meeting the expense of living is partially demanding, so if that cost rose, it would be troublesome for those people. Therefore, a new challenge will be risen as to solve such issue.
However, there is a solution that can be applied for the problem. Instead of extending the living’s cost, government can enlarge the amount of fine when citizens violated the law including cases regarding safety issues while driving or robbery. By the virtue of that, the government’s fund will expand, and this can be used to function for the costs of living of the society without rising it nor require the inhabitants to pay for.
In conclusion, rising the living costs may have brought particular influences to private individuals. Nonetheless, I deem that it is the government’s responsibility to deal with such difficulty by enacting a different law.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96981132075 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94086974297 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4764414736 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.307692308 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199396780256 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690759056956 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503907988448 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121019363352 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048660332035 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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