In the current scenario, internet one of the most essential part of every sector of world and country such as education, health, business, communication, and so on. Nowadays many governments are started to develop infrastructure for internet through invite giant internet services providers and return of these services the governments would pay huge amount of money to them. However most of the people of world are saying, that government should invest there money to improving basic infrastructure of country instead to invest to develop internet access in country.
In the continue of above debate, and from my opinion internet is very useful in three major fields of the country.
The first field of education, due to internet access most of students are easily develop their knowledge and skills and also find some interested and new information through internet, which are very helpful in their studies. We hear lots of new related to students that a small group of students are develop new technology or invented new machine for social and industrial use.
The second not least sector is Health, today everybody know, that there are lots of disease which are very dangerous and costly treatment. Lots of our medical field professional are continuously research on them. Through internet they are easily find any information about any disease and may be some information are very useful for them. In other part most of persons are easily find any information relate to any disease, which help to them treated in home and due to this activity they have save money.
The third and most important sector is industries, through internet most of companies are able to reach any part of the world to selling their products. The internet is also help to extent their business. Due to growth in business and earnings most of companies being part of economy development of the country in the form of most tax pay.
In the sum, through internet its very easy for all of us to find any information at any place in the world.
- In many countries, government spends valuable amount of money in improving the internet access?Why is this happening?Is it appropriate that government spend money on this? 61
- Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions. 73
- Some people think that large impressive buildings are important for a city Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals Discuss both these views and give your opinion 79
- Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think is has lead to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...would pay huge amount of money to them. However most of the people of world are saying,...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...velop internet access in country. In the continue of above debate, and from my opinion in...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...ld of education, due to internet access most of students are easily develop their knowledge and ...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...rnet access most of students are easily develop their knowledge and skills and also fin...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...ents that a small group of students are develop new technology or invented new machine ...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...cial and industrial use. The second not least sector is Health, today everybody know,...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'researched'.
Suggestion: researched
...cal field professional are continuously research on them. Through internet they are easi...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
... them. Through internet they are easily find any information about any disease and m...
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Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the persons') or simply say ''most persons''.
Suggestion: most of the persons; most persons
...are very useful for them. In other part most of persons are easily find any information relate ...
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Line 7, column 381, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...n other part most of persons are easily find any information relate to any disease, ...
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
... sector is industries, through internet most of companies are able to reach any part of the world...
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Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...ng their products. The internet is also help to extent their business. Due to growth...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nformation at any place in the world.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274456521739 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.119565217391 0.155533422707 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114130434783 0.0946595960268 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0461956521739 0.0501214627716 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0407608695652 0.0437548338989 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141304347826 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0217391304348 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62855460433 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0407608695652 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0788043478261 0.0861772015684 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00815217391304 0.021408717616 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108695652174 0.011925033212 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2038.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 316.048096192 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99411764706 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270588235294 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179411764706 0.203846283523 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102941176471 0.137316102897 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62855460433 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479411764706 0.56093040696 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.0711758812 60.7387585426 81% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.2857142857 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2596928619 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.571428571 127.492653851 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.814263465372 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.3445378151 49.1944974215 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.11842105263 1.69124875643 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260836642695 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.17959145251 0.102741220458 175% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0779882531685 0.0668466124924 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.700891366367 0.534860350844 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176518711413 0.148594505496 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12188496953 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566971353979 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312852687058 0.324371583561 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0485679872181 0.0638462369009 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168596980563 0.228012699653 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518666893722 0.058150111329 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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