Today the most challenging job for younger's generation, How to make way for success or career in this competitive world ? So for the convenience of graduate students most of Universities take a one forward step to develop practical skills with studies. But some of intellectual peoples started argue on these that students should be focusing only their studies.
As per my opinion, if we analysis in current situation we found that most of organisations are considered or prefer those candidates who having some practical skills and knowledge with academics. So it's necessary or duty for universities that they trained student's such like these that they can compete to other students. These can be we understand from some examples:
The Chartered Accountant of India is make compulsory article-ship training for their students. From these training the students are really gained in their career path.
But there is most of peoples thing that if students are involve in practical knowledge, may be few of them are not continue their studies. The reason behind these if students are getting training on workplace than definitely they have some earned money against their work. Any money is the one most attractive part of every human life specially for younger generation so they fear that if students are start earning money in early stage, it's may be happen that some of them left their studies and fully involved to earned money. So they are continuing argue that in early stage of university only focus on academic studies on their own sake.
In conclusion I can say we left a decision on students that on which way he want to choose between skill & academic.
- Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think is has lead to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- In many countries, government spends valuable amount of money in improving the internet access?Why is this happening?Is it appropriate that government spend money on this? 61
- Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions. 73
- Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skill needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course 73
- Some people think that large impressive buildings are important for a city Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals Discuss both these views and give your opinion 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the organisations') or simply say ''most organisations''.
Suggestion: most of the organisations; most organisations
...ysis in current situation we found that most of organisations are considered or prefer those candidat...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can be we understand from some examples: The Chartered Accountant of India is mak...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the peoples') or simply say ''most peoples''.
Suggestion: most of the peoples; most peoples
... in their career path. But there is most of peoples thing that if students are involve in p...
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Line 6, column 57, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
...t of peoples thing that if students are involve in practical knowledge, may be few of t...
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Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...l knowledge, may be few of them are not continue their studies. The reason behind these ...
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Line 8, column 77, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...cision on students that on which way he want to choose between skill & academic.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230508474576 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.159322033898 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0847457627119 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0406779661017 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0779661016949 0.0437548338989 178% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.183050847458 0.122226691241 150% => OK
Participles: 0.0406779661017 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68079753104 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169491525424 0.0326793684256 52% => OK
Particles: 0.00338983050847 0.00163938923432 207% => OK
Determiners: 0.0779661016949 0.0861772015684 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0203389830508 0.021408717616 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0101694915254 0.011925033212 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1671.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 316.048096192 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98924731183 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329749103943 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268817204301 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207885304659 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125448028674 0.137316102897 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68079753104 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551971326165 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.1300094126 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 23.25 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6084041658 49.517814964 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.25 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 50.1317204301 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.63414634146 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315736125497 0.332605444948 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146984927434 0.102741220458 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0675863294898 0.0668466124924 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.616006590511 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155430376095 0.148594505496 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136096712547 0.134430193775 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392530426015 0.0742795772207 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.198139543318 0.324371583561 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0641143070272 0.0638462369009 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18412882962 0.228012699653 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669908899199 0.058150111329 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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