Many countries have compulsory military service for men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men and possibly women. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, most nations obligate their young adults to join military force after graduating school, even all countries should implement this policy for both sexes. I, personally, state the same perspective of this issue which I elaborate more below.
On the one side, some nations enacted compulsory conscription after graduating school could hamper one to seize greater inevitable opportunities, primarily for men. It appears when undergoing military service, South Korean personnels, likely afflicts serious injuries, such as musculoskeletal disorder, induced by overused movement and activities. Furthermore, intense and extreme exercises as servicewomen may contribute to reproductive hormones decline. This disruptively influences fertility quality including menstrual cycle (amenorrhoea), even pregnancy failure. Consequently, many nations would encounter serious problem of new generations to run on the future of the country.
On the flip side, mandatory national service would foster unity to provide leadership opportunities. Mostly men will be a leader who performs a sense of duty to defend a nation, in which this may accurately comprehend strategies of opponent's movement. Eventually, the number of civilian casualties are no longer as many as Russia-Ukraine war. In addition, with serving in military unit, this could instil women to have self-defence, for instance obtaining weapon mastery, considering the occurrence of violence. It can be seen that the state constitution of United State Gun Policies permits citizens to carry gun as self-protection where women are vulnerable targets in the area of high criminal rates.
In conclusion, in my standpoint, obligatory service as national army both sexes is absolutely imperative to some extent. This includes integrating national defence personnels as well as offering self-protection. This is as long as young generation remain notching up great career opportunities after volunteering in military force.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtunities, primarily for men. It appears when undergoing military service, South ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96478873239 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27511733724 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707746478873 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7617925634 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266179697083 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709109708639 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616008590367 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15084806171 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438411415747 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.2 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtunities, primarily for men. It appears when undergoing military service, South ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, may, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96478873239 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27511733724 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707746478873 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7617925634 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266179697083 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709109708639 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616008590367 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15084806171 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438411415747 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.2 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.