Some people believe that only people who have a lot of money are successful. Others believe that success does not always equate to having lots of money. Which statement do you agree with and why?
Nowadays, several societies believe that earning numerous of dollars indicate the standardization of success individual, however, others claim that money hardly present it. I, personally, consent to positive reasons from this tropical issue which I will elucidate more below.
To begin with, one of the crucial indicators success is people who continuously strive to pursue their dream. In connection with building self-expert, many personage person sharpening their ability have spent amount of time along their life. To illustrate, many famous athletes achieve the winner competition have passed extremely training which have spent energy and time. Moreover, being useful human who develop society empowerment bring the sense of pride respectively. Professor Yohannes Surya, known as Indonesia physicist, who dedicate his selves to intensive teach student from isolated area resulting in receiving public heart.
On the other hand, earning numerous of money could widen the accessibility of the best facilities which can assist the luxury style of wealthy people, for instance, they choose an elite school and health center to have her children treat the best. Consequently, when those accessibilities is difficult to be reached, common people will seize the opportunity to indirectly bribe and abuse the rich in favour of fulfilling their needs. Furthermore, money play a pivotal role to keep individual security. In connection with fulfilling high living standards, many people suffer from depression and anxiety caused by struggling to fulfill basic necessity (food and house). If they hardly deal with this situation, the higher possibility they commit a huge loan.
In conclusion, in my standpoint, rendering trillions of money could facilitate the best services people are willing for and hinder one’s financial insecurity. This is as long as, they should be consistent to pursue their best welfare and prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'indicators'' or 'indicator's'?
Suggestion: indicators'; indicator's
.... To begin with, one of the crucial indicators success is people who continuously stri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66206896552 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8516636778 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693103448276 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6627063431 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220968845439 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650025817662 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048550403548 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11918923187 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336280340932 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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