It is true that a lot of countries import food from others around the world. From my perspective, the convenience of this trend outweighs the negative aspects.
On the one hand, a number of countries import the amount of food which is not clearly known the origin. For example, Korea had imported a great number of unoriginated vitamins from Laos. As a consequence, many Korean people who bought those medicine had some symptoms of respiratory disease. Another factor is that some kinds of food during transportation are not well-preserved. This carelessness leads to the moldiness and rottenness of the food.
On the other hand, I believe that the positive effects of the aforementioned phenomenon overshadow the negative ones. Firstly, the thing that countries buy food from others helps them possess a variety of cuisines which they did not have. For example, America and Australia have bought rice coming from Thailand and grapefruits coming from Viet Nam. One more convenience is that, when nations buy food from other parts of the world, it is an opportunity for them to cooperate with those countries and get to diversify their culture. For instance, Viet Nam has imported some food from China such as bananas, roast duck, so on. And both of them have been getting on well with each other, besides, the culture of the two nations has penetrated steadily to the rest.
In conclusion, the convenience of the tendency that countries buy a great number of food coming from others of the world overshadow the negativity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this medicine' or 'those medicines'?
Suggestion: this medicine; those medicines
...sequence, many Korean people who bought those medicine had some symptoms of respiratory diseas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00787401575 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79195766265 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1442112086 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414223726907 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140257126809 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869470338948 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267524600084 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661621657974 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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