In many countries, the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
It is undeniable that crime rates in many nations are experiencing a rising trend in both quantity and level of violence. There are various factors contributing to this trend and these following solutions can address the issue.
There are several reasons leading to the increasing numbers and intensity of crime cases. First, with the help of the Internet, materials of crime and violence are accessible to all individuals. This is because online content is not censored strictly enough by platform developers, which means anyone can upload their contents including violent ones. For example, there are numerous videos on YouTube, which is the most common video sharing platform, showing viewers the way to break into houses or even to murder. Therefore, viewers, especially teenagers, can learn and be provoked to commit serious crimes. Besides, the increasing rate of unemployment is also a significant reason. For example, the COVID-19 pandemic has adversely affected the global economy, leading to many entrepreneurs getting disbanded. Consequently, many unemployed individuals must commit crimes such as robbing, scamming or even killing to make ends meet. Therefore, crime rate and its level of violence in many countries witness a rising trend.
To tackle this problem, actions should be taken by both platform developers and politicians. Firstly, violent content on the Internet should be filtered more strictly and carefully by developers to minimize the risk of people accessing these contents. As a result, potential criminals are discouraged from committing their crime since they are no longer encouraged to and most of them do not know the way to. Secondly, companies, especially those being on the verge of going bankrupt should receive financial support from the government in order to rebound, reducing the rate of unemployment, which reduces the risk of people committing crime to make a living. As a result, these solutions can help reduce the number of crime cases and their seriousness.
In conclusion, the increasing crime rate and its level of violence in many nations are caused by the increasing rate of unemployment and violent content spread on the Internet. Tackling this issue will require actions from both platform developers and the government.
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- In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent Why do you think this is and what can be done about it 79
- In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent Why do you think this is and what can be done about it 84
- In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent Why do you think this is and what can be done about it 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41011235955 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84155837228 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542134831461 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0103346754 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291378249165 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893582426718 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053065466834 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181712958667 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236107271343 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.