In many countries the crime rate is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
It is indisputable that a large number of people in today’s world are breaking the law and their criminal activities are believed to be more heinous. Personally I think that this phenomenon is mainly a consequence of social issues and poverty. In this essay, I will first look at its primary reasons before suggesting some viable measures to remedy it.
There are various compelling reasons why the crime rate in many countries is ceaselessly increasing. First, it is unemployment that pushes people into resorting to crime. They cannot find a job and have nothing to do but engage in unlawful activities. Second, poverty is also deemed to be one of the main culprits behind the rise of offenders. It is true that in a country where economic deprivation is rampant, people will be tempted to commit theft, robbery and other violent activities. They don’t have enough money to make ends meet and therefore this seems to be their only way to make a living and support their families.
However, there are a variety of solutions that could be implemented to address the issue. One way is to send criminals to prison as they must know that unlawful actions have severe consequences. For instance, murderers must receive prison sentences for years and such a punishment may act as a deterrent. Besides, when law breakers are behind bars, they are no longer a danger to society and thus prevent intimidation. Another step that could be taken is to provide education to younger generations. Students should be well-prepared to avoid situations that may involve them in crime or becoming a victim. Some special training is reckoned to deter them from embarking on a life of crime. Prisoners should also be provided with skills and rehabilitation programmes to not reoffend when being released.
To summarize, it is unemployment and poverty that lead people to violent actions and hence increase the criminal rate in society. I believe that by sending offenders to prison and providing education for youngsters, this problem will be solved properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
It is indisputable that a large number of people in today’s world are breaking th...
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Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons. Students should be well-prepared to avoid situations that may involve them i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06194690265 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83824255795 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587020648968 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4390834344 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3157894737 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8421052632 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244332928972 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066312278061 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597201585321 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132867764003 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472356379275 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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