These days, the number of offenders tends to grow and jeopardize society tremendously. This essay will pronounce the reasons associated with this situation and provide some feasible solutions.
Firstly, too much exposure to violence on mass media certain to trigger undesirable problems. Nowadays, it is easy for people to access killing or pornographic content on the Internet and television; so, it is no doubt that people prone to imitate these repeated harmful images. Consequently, they may become uncontrollable and hazardous to society, or worse, turning to cool-blooded murderers. However, this issue can be curbed if there are concerted efforts between governments and citizens. For example, a law should be enacted to impose a ban on under-18-year-old people to watch shooting or fighting movies and to label an appropriate age for these films. Moreover, teachers and parents should supervise their children carefully from toxic information and encourage them to respect the full weight of the law.
Secondly, it is believed that law-breaking actions may be a result of unemployment. The unemployed are usually struggle with making ends meet, that is to say, it is difficult for them to meet basic requirements. To acquire a livelihood, therefore, they could earn money with any means possible, such as thefts, drug trafficking, and even murders. Nonetheless, job policies and vocational training could mitigate the negative impact of worklessness. Thanks to unemployment benefits, vocational classes, and career fairs, the jobless can meet numerous chances in recruitment. Besides, if individuals are willing to enter the workforce unconditionally, they may find a job in these programs and earn a living easily.
In conclusion, although the crime rate has the tendency to rise, there are not without feasible solutions. Only when concerted endeavors are made by the government and individuals, this thorny issue could be resolved perfectly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'struggled'.
Suggestion: struggled
...nemployment. The unemployed are usually struggle with making ends meet, that is to say, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54849498328 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16154184034 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66220735786 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9013328535 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.6875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897682706688 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275463172868 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339372292577 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570295230537 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289883453975 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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