In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society?
What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?
Hardly can anyone deny the increasing popularity of unemployment of young people in recent years. This essay aims at why to mention impacts and measures to reduce the level of unemployment.
On the one hand, there are a wide range of impacts from the unemployment of youngster, one of which is that unemployment has negative influence on personal finance. In other words, because people do not have jobs, they do not have money. As a result, people can not fulfil their demands. Also, unemployment is the reason why many social issues appear. To be more specific, when the young are unemployed, they tend to break the law to have a lot of money for their demands. This can lead to the fact that society is unsafe. For example, many people in Africa tend to break the law because they do not have jobs.
On the other hand, there are many solutions which decrease the level of unemployment. First, people should educate youth how to work when they are studying in schools. in other words, if pupils study how to work after they graduate. Besides, governments should use more media. to be more specific, media approaches everyone, including the young. This may result in the fact that youngsters get many opportunities to provide more information about jobs.
In conclusion, the problem of unemployment are unemployment has a negative influence on personal finance and unemployment is also the reason why many social issues appear. however, Strong measures such as educating and using media to provide information about jobs could be applied to tackle the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99239543726 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72706554129 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490494296578 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8354613256 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2352941176 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30250995449 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905134177629 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422797971531 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173529912051 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276383646852 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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