In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What are the solutions?
In this day and age, despite the development of the countries, the youth unemployment still increases. In this essay, I will explain two main problems caused by this issue which are high rate crime and anxiety feelings as well as give solutions to them.
To begin with, post-gratuated students who do not have a job might become criminals. Everyone has a family to take care of, and they need money to do it. However, since they are unemployed, they may find another way to deal with financial problems, which means they would hold up or kill someone to take the money. Moreover, youth unemployment might feel that they are useless, they can not do anything by themselves except depend on their parents, or their family. this could lead to the anxious and depress feelings, which can make them to have horrible actions, for instance, hurt themselves or find a way to die.
In my point of views, to tackle this issue, two solutions should be volunteer joining and the help from relatives, or friends. Firstly, it is the unoccupied people who should take part in social activities in order to gain more experience, therefore, widening the possibility of getting a work. In addition, since they are to busy dealing with the voluntary work, they will not have time to do harm somebody. Secondly, if these people are helped by their siblings or friends, there might be a chance for them to think positive and lists everything that give their life "meaning".
In conclusion, criminality and desperation are the results of unemployment. Also, I suggest charity work and relatives will be the solutions to solve the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96376811594 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83195924648 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6102129509 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.384615385 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132265563531 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435223091021 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026573048517 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727937985774 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302565332337 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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